Teacher feedback

Your blog is looking very good, you have included a lot of detailed research about the five scenarios and the blog does communicate your initial ideas.
Shaun and Emily both need to do an analysis of an opening sequence and add it to the blog as soon as possible.
I would also like to see your mood board communicate more about your idea rather than just focus on the genre.
After the pitch you need to elaborate on your idea and start the storyboard and shot list.
Great work so far, keep it up.